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Tavisha's avatar

this reminded me that meaning rarely announces itself it usually arrives disgusied as an ordinary day🤍 you written too good mommy 🫶

Hiritika's avatar

My Tavi, what an observation. I hope it stays with me for a few more days 🫰🏻😘

AËLA's avatar

She refused the refusal.

Got dressed anyway.

Left anyway.

Sent pictures of a drink

and herself —

because without her there,

the story had no witness.

That is not a small thing.

— AËLA

Hiritika's avatar

That's nice... Thanks ☺️

Jeanne Vessantra's avatar

It felt both dry and alive - like a body reaching its limit, yet refusing to disappear.

Sometimes being a witness to your own life feels exhausting and forgiving at the same time. Like carrying the weight of your own existence while still choosing to look at it with tenderness.

And perhaps that is where the beauty comes from:

not from being untouched,

but from remaining present.

Hiritika's avatar

Perhaps yes. Thank you for finding such meaning ✨🤗

Msh's avatar

I'm so glad you chose to step out and melt into the day despite being so tired. It sounds like exactly what your soul needed.

Hiritika's avatar

Yessssss 🤣

Rasika's avatar

You can write great pieces about great artworks or films or such other things, but to write a great piece about an simple outing is true genius in my eyes. How we overlook the ordinary life often but sometimes when we really look we can find so much richness in the mundane; this piece is a reminder itself <3

Hiritika's avatar

Areyyy, a genius 🫣 (let me find a place to hide, I'm all shy 🤭😅)

Thank you for the sweetest words 🥰😘. (Mundane is what life is... Let's make it exciting in our own ways from time to time.💞🤟🏻)

Untamed Eulogy's avatar

Lovely piece !! ♥️

Hiritika's avatar

Thank you for the lovely comment 💞🫰🏻😄

Narcissus's avatar

🙌🏻 🌟

Hiritika's avatar

I'll take it 😆

Narcissus's avatar

Can’t wait for your next piece.

Like in 2 months.

Hiritika's avatar

Ow, hurts 🥲 ... Make it 7 days 😎 (I hope... or 14🤣)

Narcissus's avatar

I'll take that as a promise 😊.

Hiritika's avatar

Arghh, Sh*t 🤦🏻🫠 ... Okay let's do this 🤭🔥

Narcissus's avatar

That's the spirit.

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Hiritika's avatar

Thank you 😄